The story is very enjoyable. Its highest points are the lunatic known as Klein, that affable mass of chaos, and how you are tackling the topic of world merging in a rather natural manner. It is done naturally, people are aggressive, angry, and spiteful because of the literal, but unwillingly done on the part of both worlds, mass deaths. They don't listen to reason, and want someone to blame which leads to fights Mr.Weather's willingness to help, but still composed and calm despite the chaos going on is admirable and highlights that the character is empathic, and good-hearted despite being calm and collected. This contrasts with Klein who has this childish wonder and vibes around him. He is a little affable ball of chaos, but he is also a spath. he doesn't seem to care about people who are suffering about him or the chaos going on, rather, he is amused at this and doesn't care about anyone else besides his friends to a degree (by what is shown in the book thus far) and Weathers, but even then... he is aloof. Distant, almost uncaring. He is affable and funny, enjoyable to see, but an uncaring person who doesn't give two cents about the suffering and what is going on, doing things only to get a kick out of it, or have enjoyment at the expanse of the chaos. A very interesting book.

I’m not one who usually reads novels with tropes like this, but I must admit that the setting is very unique and diverse. The characters are absolute gold and I can’t wait to witness their interactions and dynamics with each other. The plot is also taking an extremely interesting direction, it seems average and typical one minute and then you don’t know what to expect the next. As for the style of writing, it’s engaging and straightforward which makes it pleasant to read.Overall I’m really looking forward to more chapters of this work and I sincerely hope that it wins the contest.

A playful and humorous story with very shounen vibes. It is unapologetic about its comedic light-hearted nature, clearly enjoying itself. The preamble with the explanation of the deep magic system may make it seem like it's a complex and lore-heavy story, but so far this doesn't seem to be the case. Rather than required pre-reading it's more like the story is too busy having fun to slow itself down enough to explain the system itself. Whether that's a good or bad thing is up to the reader. I found the sprinkles of political humor to be distracting and pull me out of the story, but they're not so common at this point as to be a real problem even if this is the case for a reader. No one in the story enjoys themselves so much as Klein, and not even repeated brushes with death will put a dent into his enjoyment. This is fortunately noted and reacted negatively to by other characters, so I'm sure the writer has something planned for Klein's strange behavior. While he spends the novel (so far) calling everyone else aliens he is ironically the one acting most like an alien. The story hasn't yet had time to develop the other side characters yet, but there appears to be about half a dozen or so potential characters who will eventually share the spotlight. At the moment the story is full of mystery, action, and comedy. Even as answers are given, however, it can be assumed the action and comedy actions will remain. The story is fast-paced and an easy read, but can be disturbing at times, as Klein's cavalier attitude results in narration casually playing off things the reader might not. If you're looking for an action fantasy story that blends high fantasy with urban fantasy and a pinch of apocalypse genre (and humor), this is possibly one of the best places to look for it. At least so far.

At the beginning, you were very clever in writing comedy and the closeness between Klein and Mr. Weathers. And after chapter 3 and onwards, it's very impressive, especially in the form of conflict between ordinary humans and witches. I also like Klein's calm attitude that lightens the mood.

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Definitely a story to look out for. I am not a fan of modern world fics but the writing style is just phenomenal. If the story establishes a good world, and eventually refines its power systems, it would be an amazing read.

This story is a delightful blend of epic fantasy and modern world elements, with a touch of dark fantasy thrown in for good measure. Writing is good, vivid discriptions and nice imagery, didn't really see any errors. The author works hard, updates are frequent, unlike me kek. Lastly, the characters are witty and engaging, and the world-building is shaping up to be incredibly interesting. Especially Klein, clearly a well thought out character. Overall, the novel has alot of potential.

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I really like how its starting out so far. This novel has a unique twist to the mundane routine of Klein Stanfield on the Continent and the unsuspecting people of Earth. Writing quality above average for webnovel and enough twist and turns to keep you interested. Keep it going author!