Item: Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy
Rating: 2.8

BelthezzorLv411mth

2023-12-21 13:58

So much wasted potential. The story started out good, but then the author just dropped another character in with no thought, and then basically mentally killed the MC.

Stargate: Harry Potter and Merlin's Legacy

Ashmodai

3.5

45 Chs

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