Review Detail of Lua_C in Silver Serenade

Hi Author! The book's proposal is very good and has great potential! But I missed the involvement that the plot promises. Although the writing was okay, I couldn't feel the emotions that should have been conveyed in each scene. I know that no matter what happened, it would still be a haunting fate for Aurelia, but I think she should have fought a little harder, it would have brought more feeling to the narrative. "Even if it seems impossible...I should still fight for my life somehow, after all, this is my life..." These are some of my sincere thoughts. I hope I can give you a better evaluation next time!