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Sayto_MoraLv111mthSayto_Mora

this is a good chapter, the intro was good even though it's not perfect and needs to improve, its still good overall. also why did you stop updating your second book? i was waiting for the fight author. can't believe i can't see who will win between shadow or the demon guy. well don't stop this time.

Unfamiliar Wanderer

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I'm not good at fighting scenes yet, so I just stopped. but don't worry this time I will not. i will also try to improve my writing.