Review Detail of Mixatye in Endless Dantian English Translation

First of all, the original author of this novel is Heng Sao Tian Ya, the author of LoHP (Library of Havens Path). From my point of view till the point I have reached in the novel, 1. This is a great piece of work based on quality of writing and plot 2. As this is a translation made from my own interest and accord, the update of chapters could get irregular. I ask the readers to be forgiving and patient in this regard. 3. The story develops very well. Each event hasn't dragged on to a point where it gets boring and twists and turns make the outcomes unexpected most of the times. 4. The main character in specific seems of strong personality. The supporting characters like his cousin and some friends have potential to grow important and strong characters in the novel. 5. The world background is not bad at all and fits the novel quite well. Finally, I thank the readers for appreciating my work. As this is my first work of translation to be uploaded, it might have some inconsistency with the authors original meaning and certain points. I ask you to mention them if possible. Lastly, I would like to work on other novels as a translator. I ask you to recommend some of your taste. I will try to meet your demand if the responses are good and I get interested in the novel like I got interested in Endless Dantian. Oh, right. Please don't forget to mention some strong points to mention about the novel you recommend. So, it will be helpful to assess for me.