Review Detail of Kw0z in Zombolution: Unleash the Undying Power

Absolute garbage. I’m surprised anyone could even choke this down, seeing as I couldn’t. Anyways, moving onto the actual review: Writing quality: 2/5. There aren’t many mistakes, so that would be a 4, but the fact that I can’t imagine a single place because the author never describes the scenes drops it to a 3. And then adding the fact that literally 90% of the dialogue is extremely cringe and feels like a punishment to read, that drops it to a 2. Updating Stability: 5/5. Can’t say anything since the novel is completed. Story Development: 2/5. The novel procrastinates on literally the most useless things, but constantly skips important things. Terrible pacing overall, and made the novel extremely painful to even get through, so I had to drop it around chapter. 30. Character Design: 1/5. This is the reason I dropped. Not only is the main character’s name the dumbest thing I’ve ever laid eyes on, but his decisions make no sense either. One second he’s whining about how his group betrayed him, and then he’s killing innocent people in the name of evolution. Hypocrite at it’s finest. The main reason I dropped was the main character being extremely cringe though. He’s the type of person to say “Let’s do this!” before a fight, or the type of person to yell before he attacks someone from a sneak attack. World Background: 2/5. I could only choke down 30 chapters, but there’s been no crucial world building so far.