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binibiningMaila
binibiningMailaLv11yr
2023-10-22 11:48

Oh my gosh, this fantasy novel has me absolutely hooked! The world-building is incredible, the characters are so complex and interesting, and the plot is just full of twists and turns! I can't put it down - I'm dying to know what happens next! This is the kind of book that you lose yourself in completely, and I am just living for it right now. If you love fantasy, you have got to read this book! waiting for the next chap...

Chains of Destiny

VoidPhantom
4.6
13 Chs

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VoidPhantom
VoidPhantomAuthor

i appreciate the review, thanks a lot. I will do my best to update steadily

1yr
binibiningMaila
binibiningMailaLv1

you're welcome keep writing

1yr
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QuinnKey
QuinnKeyLv2

Add more details on your synopsis, so we will know more about the world you build. First and second chapters are well written, there's no need to add. He has a darkness power right? I'm expecting you'll add something more about his power next and how he will fight using it.. there's a lot of darkness power fighting scene we can read. the question is what uniqueness your novel can offer. I'm looking forward.

1yr

Brynn543
Brynn543Lv1

The idea isn't bad but work on your synopsis so readers like me will know what we're expecting to see I in the novel. Above all, you're an amazing writer.

1yr
ScriptGamer
ScriptGamerLv2

The start is good, I've read the first chapter only and the story already goes darkening. Though I suggest to describe more inner feelings or dialogue for the mc, it would add more colors to the story.

1yr
Vimbai_Murindagomo
Vimbai_MurindagomoLv1

Well done author you have a great plot. The storyline is fast paced and just draws the reader to want to read on. Nicely done.

1yr
cute_baby_phoenix
cute_baby_phoenixLv2

Okay so I am not into this kind of plots but honestly it's okay but,I think the synopsis is a little too long and it's bland,edit some details,let there be some dailogue,it's okay it will go a long way the chapters are good 🤛🤛

1yr
Notti_Mind
Notti_MindLv3

perfect, the story was absolutely perfect but the author needs to add more info on the synopsis

1yr
HarveyBakes
HarveyBakesLv2

As I read the story it seems Interesting shadows,magic, etc. but somehow I notice something my advise is that don't put too much narration on the story add some conversations too make it look intense , overall the story was good the plot, and can you add something on the future that makes him revive some undead and make him its shadow allies just asking but oveall it's fine.-HarveyBakes

1yr
Castro_ftxe
Castro_ftxeLv1

darn good if I would say so my self, nice work from the Author, this is an anti-hero in reality.

1yr
GEEGEE
GEEGEELv13

It jus started but can see dt we are getting smwhere already. lets see more and see where this is going☺️ and all d best😁

1yr
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