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krokrok007
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2024-02-23 18:26

Its good so far, the updates are consistant and there arent too many grammatical mistakes. The MC is really dark but that was expected from the synopis.

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MK0
4.3
5 Chs

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KaratePepe
KaratePepeLv4

I really want to like this and I will continue to read this story, but the MC is SOOO unlikable.

10mth

yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv14

5 useless chapters right of the bat. Could've been in a single chapter and then grammar sucks. Simple as that. .

12mth
MK0
MK0Author

As an author, it is my obligation to give 5 entries. This time I promise a better quality story. Will this be the best story you’ve ever read? Maybe yes, maybe no, but I promise it will be fun and interesting.

1yr
Henntaai
HenntaaiLv1

OMG! Full Metal Alchemist x Harry Potter! 5 Stars just for the idea! [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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in_praise_of_folly
in_praise_of_follyLv4

forced dark theme. mc is quite unlikeable.

3mth
gep_gep
gep_gepLv1

this is vary good! that intro was a bit jarring but i fond myself on the edge of my seat reading this wanting to know what would happen next and what this crazy MC will do next. its a dark story so if you are not in to that kind of thing you may not want to read it but i think its vary well written up to the point were i have read and i look forward to reading more :)

4mth
Big_Mushroom
Big_MushroomLv4

5 stars because it’s fma fanfic… yep that my reason

6mth
lector_enfermo
lector_enfermoLv1

Muy buena historia de lo poco legible que hay en este sitio. Los personajes tienen un buen desarrollo por lo que va de historia (13caps) así que el futuro parece prometedor.

12mth
bananaman
bananamanLv3

I like it

7mth
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