This was one of my most highly anticipated fanfics. I was a big fan of Smallville. sadly I was sorely let down. This is just about an mc who is a side character in someone else's story. hes an outsider. no friends. no meaningful relationships. I say none because his presence has never actually changed any of the plot, maybe some small details between plot events BUT LITERALLY NEVER CHANGED ONE EVENT. any story where the plot doesn't change is at most a 3 star story. His GF, who I loved originally, is a joke now. she still thinks he's some human? she's an angel. and he flies and super speeds everywhere. Clark still does the same stuff. dad still dies. they do train earlier than the OG but thats not important. the same people died as the original. when it comes down to it, nothing has really happened that he's done thats of any note. fighting some criminals as a police officer. which has done nothing. Big let down. who wants to read about a side character who brings nothing new to the actually story? just watch Smallville, its better.

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Fantastic story. If you like Smalllville, you would love this story

it's different unique not many smallvile stories I'm hope you publish more chapters

Its a good Smallville Fanfic if not the best one i so far read. Its funny, enjoyable and easy to read. There are some grammer mistakes but who cares much about some Type error. Its unique or i havent read a fanfic Like this yet that plays in dc/Smallville [img=update][img=update][img=update]I NEED MORE CHAPTERS[img=update][img=update][img=update] I recommend to give it a try

I love this book with all of my heart my only gripe and that's its a weekly update!! ( even tho it's 2 chapters at once it's never enough!!!)

Nah man the more time passes, the more the quality declines, I mean, it wasn't glorious before but now it's becoming catastrophic. The harem, the lack of emotions. I feel like I'm completely detached from the story because of the way it's written. There is no tension, no action. Frankly, I feel like I'm reading the Wikipedia summary episode by episode of the smallville series. Really I pushed this far to see if it was improving but obviously not, so I'll stop reading this. (Stop reading at chapter 112)

I like the premise of the story, and the grammar is excellent. The only true grievance I have is the progression of the chapters. I just don't know if they're too short or if not enough is happening. Keep it up, Author-san. I'm very interested in how you'll change canon!

a very good novel smooth story i like it a shame that is this short... well it good work!

I very much like the slice of life type of fiction. but the mc personality of letting everything flow and just giving his point of view on some matters hasn't changed anything. The author just put more characters of different parts of DCverse.