Review Detail of Black_H34rt in Awakening: I have a Game Panel with Recovery(unique)

The Story is great and very interesting but what ruins it for me(More of a personal preference) is how dialogues are held and how you portray the MC thinking. I don’t know how to describe the way the MC thinks and exclaims at every single thing he comes across but it feels unreal especially when he was taken against his will as a test subject and in the middle of enemy territory with a ticking bomb in him no less(mind parasite) It just makes no sense seeing him act as he is doing but as i said before it’s more of a personal criticism, the novel is quite enjoyable Just not something i can make do with, the dialogues and thought process of Mc makes me feel like someone just decided to mess with the novel in a way something that can be easily described takes forever and a lot of sophistication that is just not needed No one thinks like their brain’s got a dictionary