This story lacks emotion and color... it almost feels like I'm reading a text book on philosophy. its kind of boring especially the 5-6 chapters... they are the most important chapters of any story, they determine if a reader will continue reading or get bored and drop it.
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LIKEHi Readers, I'm sorry for not updating any new chapters from the last few months. when I saw my book again I found many mistakes I made, I missed many of my previous ideas that I wanted to update before... I can't Update the previous chapters every time I make a mistake. So, I started writing a new book "Start as a Spiritual Planter: I Have a Game Panel" The concept for the new book is the same as the "Awakening: I Have a Game Panel with Recovery(unique)" however slightly different new characters, new plot with all the ideas I missed earlier. However, the initial plot is the same with talent Recovery, Plant Evolution, and Monster evolution.