Item: The Fairy's Clover
Rating: 5
Author: hmak27230

hmak27230Author1yr

2023-10-19 01:04

Hey guys, This is my first online published fanfic so I would appreciate some input and feedback and ideas to put out my best work. Don't feel the need to mince your words and be blunt, I like talks that are straightforward. I'm going to be shameless and give this 5 starts, hope you don't mind!

The Fairy's Clover

hmak27230

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33 Chs

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HOLY_BOBLv4

Romance ? Please say no.

1yr

hmak27230Author

if there is it would be very slow burn and not a central plot figure

HOLY_BOB:Romance ? Please say no.

1yr

Azathoth2Lv4

harem?? hope not

hmak27230:if there is it would be very slow burn and not a central plot figure

1yr

hmak27230Author

I meant to romance there will not be any harem

Azathoth2:harem?? hope not

1yr

hmak27230Author

If there is romance it will be very slow burn and not a pivotal plot figure. Just something that occurs on the side.

hmak27230:if there is it would be very slow burn and not a central plot figure

1yr

GrammyLv12

Day would the mc be able to get more templates from black clover or just one and if he can dose he have to max out his first one to do it?

1yr

GrammyLv12

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Grammy:Day would the mc be able to get more templates from black clover or just one and if he can dose he have to max out his first one to do it?

1yr

hmak27230Author

like i said he can get unlimited templates but he has to max out his current one before moving on. however there will be some exceptions you'll see in the future and one pretty soon.

Grammy:Day would the mc be able to get more templates from black clover or just one and if he can dose he have to max out his first one to do it?

1yr

KingKarma_1766Lv4

how can you guys a fanfic with so many good females and not have a single girl

HOLY_BOB:Romance ? Please say no.

1yr

HOLY_BOBLv4

Im here for a good story not the same old pokemon harem type. And most authors s*ck at writing romance literally.So i rather not read such horrible stuff.

KingKarma_1766:how can you guys a fanfic with so many good females and not have a single girl

1yr

EmmericHLv13

yeah, and a lot of them think it's even more fun to smutify all that

HOLY_BOB:Im here for a good story not the same old pokemon harem type. And most authors s*ck at writing romance literally.So i rather not read such horrible stuff.

1yr

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JaharLv13

I just read the chapters up to 9 and I have a feeling that something has changed in your way of writing from chapter 7, I don't know what it is but the way he thinks is different or the way you describe the action in progress. It's like an itch but I don't know where it comes from. Otherwise it's the best fanfiction prologue I've read and frankly I can't wait to read the rest. THANKS

1yr

Crownless312Lv4

I like the story it has good grammar and it's nice to read so please don't drop it

1yr

AlfiemooonLv4

I personally can't get past the first chapter. it's just too word heavy, almost like you've seen a novel with intricate details and fantastic prose and tried, and failed, to imitate it. There are run on sentences, unnatural sentence structures and unnecessary word fluff. You could skip like 70% of the chapter and miss nothing. I'll try my best to get past a few more chapters, but my expectations are low, especially because that was apparently the revised version. In which case, I just don't see the story getting any better than that.

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GleipnirtxLv4

Please don’t drop the story, I really like it

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