Review Detail of Raphis in The Council of Heroes

Hmm... Even though the story is excellent, quite intense, challenging, and every event is written neatly, why is your writing so messy? 😑 Honestly, when I read it, it's easy to imagine, but your writing becomes a barrier. Try to differentiate more between narrative and dialogue texts. Also, pay attention to certain factors that should look impressive, but you make them seem ordinary. But truly, this novel is very good.