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RaphisLv31yr
2023-11-14 14:18

"Initially, it was quite good, providing deep emotions about caste and status. However, in the early part when the zombie apocalypse occurs, it was still lacking in my opinion. Perhaps it lacked pacing. Additionally, the explanation of the events and factors that occurred seemed unclear. But the creation of each character's traits and attitudes in the novel was well-written."

REINCARNATED AS A GIRL IN THE APOCALYPSE

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Not going to lie your story had me hooked I love Gavin's silliness as well as his bravery. A good read that deserves 5 stars

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Reveal spoiler

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well. Not my type of book though. But it was interesting up to where I read.

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Overall, this story is a nice one and very interesting, I would love it if a little detail is added to the MC's thoughts and replies.

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story is deeper and much more interesting.Never judge a book by its cover

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I love the book to bits,I just can't wait for more.Its got me hooked and ready for more.Keep the suspense coming and I await the perfect climax.

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Ekwonna_Irene
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Good story, very engaging and interesting tho it sound like a cliche so i am hoping for a change twist. one problem tho is the some grammatical errors, but overall it was a good read. cheering you on author!

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overall the composition of the novel 8s proper, it is straight forward and doesn't confuse the reader. the work is properly executed. cuddos to the author

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I have to give you a honest review to help you grow, Good story but the grammatical errors are too much, revisit your work from chapter 1

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