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_Tea_Lover_Lv151yr
2023-11-20 14:23

Pretty good story compared to most on this platform nowadays. Probably should be more like 4.5 stars, but I personally dislike the harem and the relationship drama in the early chapters.

I Can Steal Attributes In The Apocalypse!

WenLin
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39 Chs

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WenLin
WenLinAuthor

Mhm, I can guess why. I also feel like I stretched the line too thin there.Thanks for the review!

1yr
Nero_Okita
Nero_OkitaLv15

yeah, her reactions felt weird in the first chapters, too loose.

WenLin:Mhm, I can guess why. I also feel like I stretched the line too thin there.Thanks for the review!
1yr
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WenLin
WenLinAuthor

Yes! And when I write it, I can't feel it that way, but when I go back and see it again, I'm ashamed :(*

Nero_Okita:yeah, her reactions felt weird in the first chapters, too loose.
1yr
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WenLin
WenLinAuthor

Author here.First of all, I'd like to say that the story would be pretty slow paced in the beginning, before slowly going faster.Harem? Yes. OP? Yes. Lot of interesting 'things'? Yes. There will be much more in store for this book, since I don't want it to be a generic type. If you don't like a simple minded MC(in the beginning) and don't want to wait until you see his improvements, in all areas, it's your choice. For now, if you have any questions, feel free to ask them here and I will do my best to answer.

1yr

Hello_sir123
Hello_sir123Lv12

From the chapters I've read the novel is good and I'm hoping for more of it.

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