Mc is emptionless. Sorry don’t like to read about robots. Prefer humans who don’t kill innocent desperate people to save others because they interest the MC. Everything else is fine. But in this era of emptionless and cruel MCs I’d really like someone to break the trend to write an MC who’s not either dense/ stupid/ too nice or inhuman/evil/ dark. These tropes are getting boring now.

The story is interesting if you can understand the personality of the MC. Many people complain about the speed at which Carla's relationship with the MC developed, but that's what the story is about. If you want something serious, better go read the original material. This fanfic makes things clear to you from the beginning. As an author, I know how difficult it is to create a story, even if it is a fanfic, so you deserve 5 stars. I hope you can continue publishing more chapters.

Used AI to write your novel and yet it’s still garbage. How do you even manage to do that? Then again, you also said it wouldn’t be a Pokémon harem, but then one of the first love interests, Carla, falls for him nearly instantly. I mean, her legs are being crushed under a building, and yet she can’t help but drool and blush when she sees Kaito for the first time ever. Anyways, overall, if you don’t know how to write romance, then don’t write it.

Hi, it's the author here! This is my first time writing a full-length work, but I have tried to maintain a coherent plot with minimal grammatical errors. But if you do find any, point it out, and I will correct it. The initial chapters can be a bit confusing, so bear with me. Also, the novel can be a bit slow pace in the starting. As for what you can expect in this story, telling too much will spoil the readers, but still, let's see. No mindless harem Comedy at the most unexpected timing Plot with a bit of mystery I don't know what more to write here, so Read out and Find Out!

Good planning and overall development but the dialogues are weird and generic, not like their real selfs, MC as well sound like a concatenation of random cringe dialogues from a Marvel movie.

while I never liked a dark character or that emotionless MC but the fanfic is excellent. I hope it doesn't get dropped. there are some grammatical errors but they won't affect your reading and might go unnoticed actually.

a nice read with good story telling and character design.

What a piece of art I have discovered! The mc is quirky, unafraid and above all, a bit of absurd. Starting the story you have little clue of what is happening, but as the story unfolds you realize the what's happening. It's a bit of slow-pace. Luckily you don't realize that as you get so engulfed in the story.

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