Review Detail of DaoistT6iO1q in I'm The Pitiful Villain
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bro! Your novel constantly changing POV is really annoying. For me personally, the way you lead your story by constantly changing POV will interrupt the way I feel the story you want to show readers.😑😑😑
I'm The Pitiful Villain
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Alright~ since this is my first novel I hope you understand. (I can easily take criticism, though, to improve 😚) I'll keep your review in mind then. And if you have Time do inform me if this problem still arises in the future. Thanks for reading have a good day~ (or maybe edit the review? idk if that's even possible lmfao fuck my life 😂)
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