Review Detail of DaoistUdwfGJ in I'm The Pitiful Villain
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overall your story is good but I hope it isn't about the game make it different and his 🤢 for commoners make it a curse that some1 did to him when he was young i hope he doesn't become an egy lord 😅 plus he's always on his thought like he could have killed the wolves while the heroine n Kevin were fighting the alpha plus make the system more presentable like make it a mystery
I'm The Pitiful Villain
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Hello, thank you for the review. Don't worry he is not going to become some edgy guy HAHA lmao that's cringe af.However, lemme give you some hints:What you commented, you almost guessed what will unfold in the future. But there will be much deeper reasons. The reason why he is the way he is is much more complicated and not only one reason.Sorry for the grammar lmao but yeah, don't worry the story is also not about the game but "him" our main character.But since this is my first novel, don't expect too much. Have a good day~
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