Honestly, this novel is good. This review is short because I think you should really read it yourself. The main character is unique and cool without being insane, stupid, or a selfish b*stard. The side characters are interesting, I kinda wish we knew what each of their races are, but you can kinda guess from their descriptions. The writing quality lags behind the content quality making for some blatant mistakes, but Kingsmaker doesn't correct anything even if you point it out to him. Don't bother. And honestly, even if it is annoying, the story makes up for the mistakes. We have one female lead, some romantic interests, and a few side couples. They are pretty good. Something tells me I shouldn't get too attached to any characters though. We also have a yandere. I like yanderes. My favorite girl is Nyza. And yeah, that's all I have to say. Go read the book.
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Thanks for the review, it really motivates me to do even better!I'm glad you enjoyed the reading.About the mistakes part, I avoid re-uploading the chapters because it gives the bot on Discord a signal to say that a new chapter was released, and also to avoid triggering the Webnovel's notification of a new chapter. It might also mess with the upload rate from Webnovel, giving people misinformation, so I normally recognize when people point out a mistake but don't correct it if there are too few, to not re-upload every time I see one because of the reason I said before.I'm glad you liked the side characters, and about their races, I agree that I kinda pushed this to the side but I will eventually bring it back.About the writing quality, please point out what you think I can do to better it, I'm always open to feedback.If you have any ideas, suggestion, or complaints, feel free to tell.Once again, thank you for the review and for reading! 🍷😎
Nevermind the thing I talked about mistakes, I just corrected one and noticed that it didn't trigger any notification. Either I remembered it wrong or it stopped after Webnovel updated the app.🤡Anyway, I will start correcting them now.
Kyle_Kingsmaker:Thanks for the review, it really motivates me to do even better!I'm glad you enjoyed the reading.About the mistakes part, I avoid re-uploading the chapters because it gives the bot on Discord a signal to say that a new chapter was released, and also to avoid triggering the Webnovel's notification of a new chapter. It might also mess with the upload rate from Webnovel, giving people misinformation, so I normally recognize when people point out a mistake but don't correct it if there are too few, to not re-upload every time I see one because of the reason I said before.I'm glad you liked the side characters, and about their races, I agree that I kinda pushed this to the side but I will eventually bring it back.About the writing quality, please point out what you think I can do to better it, I'm always open to feedback.If you have any ideas, suggestion, or complaints, feel free to tell.Once again, thank you for the review and for reading! 🍷😎