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based soley on the sinopsis i loved you sir author and i am sure your work will be great

It was an amazing read 💯💯💯too bad it was quite short

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The overall plot comes of as great especially since he doesn't eat people in front of Vi and the gang since ya know, he's supposed to be a child so 10/10.

loved this book wish it was longer but man the ending will surprise you

The writing is pretty good though the MC is pretty useless from the start *according to the author it is intended so that Powder can turn into Jinx.* I just don't know if the MC would turn from Psycho to a better person or From Psycho to a mass murderer deranged demon lord cliche or something

very good

there are a few chapters that characters have no expression when talking, Sometimes, I get bored when authors write like this: exampleme: "Is this kid really that scary?"friend: : "Yea, this little kid!" me: "Really!?"no expression, don't overdo that but overall, it's a good story.

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