Story is good, few mistakes here and there with the occasional annoying pov switches. My problem is with the character, I don’t know if that’s the author’s intention but the mc is a literal Percy Jackson demigod(in my eyes). Problem is he’s not like the others whose power levels change with respect to the enemy, his power levels remain the same. Dude is more like a mortal with the gift for underworld magic and artifacts than a demigod honestly Now for the story development: I’ve read 101 chapters and I honestly don’t see where this story is going. Things(at least to me) are just haywire. I don’t see the benefits of the mcs training and he has the same difficulty with every for he faces. Besides as a transmigrator he makes series of mistakes which is honestly just getting old and redundant The story is really good honestly but the little little things like this make it frustrating (it’s like I’m reading a dc comic all over again and let me tell you it’s interesting for kids with all the minor plot holes but not for me) Nice story author
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