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Lua_C
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Hi Author! The story reminds me a lot of Douluo, one of my favorites! I don't know, maybe that's why I felt it lacked a bit of emotion. But overall, it's obviously not bad! The idea of being reborn in a new world is always painful and interesting, at least in the aspect that was Einar's death. I advise you to revise the narrative of the facts, especially in the first chapter, it will have a better impact on the readers. It has a lot of potential!

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SJM07

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SJM07
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Thank you for the feedback! I am aware that this is a major flaw in my writing and I will try to improve it as much as I can! Please continue your support as it's a great source of motivation for me.

Lua_C
Lua_CLv1Lua_C

SJM07:Thank you for the feedback! I am aware that this is a major flaw in my writing and I will try to improve it as much as I can! Please continue your support as it's a great source of motivation for me.