Review Detail of SJM07 in The Chronicles of Gaia

Hey there, Author here. The 5-star rating is obviously just to get your attention, not even I am conceited enough to give my own work 5 stars. I just want to let you know that I'm aware that the writing is quite terrible at the start, but I would really appreciate it if you gave it a chance. I do promise it will get better as I get into the flow. I would also really appreciate comments, they allow me to better my work and understand what works or doesn't work. Thanks for reading!