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2023-10-18 04:22

I like this story because its'ssimple and easy to read. I like the use of little poems to raise the mystery. Im' looking forward to read the next chapter... 👍

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I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks for the feedback, it means a lot. I'm all ears if you have any suggestions or thoughts. Let's make this adventure even better together! 📖💫

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