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Zero_Five_7869
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2023-10-28 16:29

It's not bad in any particular way but it's not good, Thr Mc's character is inconsistent with what the author tried to do, and many events just appear fulfilled, he still fails to explain the main character powers on multiple occasion, he said they were updated but they weren't

Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands

John_Doe_777
4.8
53 Chs

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John_Doe_777
John_Doe_777Author

Dude, I updated it. I don't know why the webnovel app won't show it. It is updated when I open the chapters in the browser, tho.

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Amanise
AmaniseLv4

I cant wait to see more , please do not drop , shadow slave fanfic is already rare much less such a promising one 😊👌

1yr

John_Doe_777
John_Doe_777Author

Please, write your honest thoughts about the Fanfic. Don't spam reviews if you please and respect the opinions of others. Sincerely, John_Die_777.

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Nightsking
NightskingLv1

Reveal spoiler

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Tetsuga03
Tetsuga03Lv12

I'm not familiar with Shadow:Slave novel but to me it looking good so far. Also can you put picture of character if there any? Just so someone who not familiar with this novel can know they're faces and the most important question is... who gonna be in the harem?

1yr
JFalcon
JFalconLv4

It's the best Shadow Slave fanfic out there right now, no questions asked. (There really should be more of these..). Nothing more that needs to be said, go read it right now if you haven't already!!

1yr
RexVector
RexVectorLv11

Been reading this until chapters 27 and I could say that it really good. Maybe the only complaints I have is the updated for this FF. Hoping Author will make it until the end!

1yr
Edgarus
EdgarusLv4

So far a good story. He has his own personality and interesting ability so far. Hope the story won't be dropped cause this is a masterpiece

1yr
mollyql
mollyqlLv1

I have nothing better to do so im writing this review Writing quality - 9/10 - There was some weirdness to the sentences in the initial chapters but it gets fixed after like 1-2 chaps Stability of updates - Im dying of curiosity Story Development - The scenes that are should be important are fleshed out very nicely and if the story starts getting stale the pace is boosted so 10/10 in this department Character design - Pretty well thought out characters and emotional scenes we even get to see other characters' thoughts besides the mc for better understanding of their actions World Background - There's this entire city war arc which was pretty epic in my opinion but yeah not much not much world building done yet

1yr
ShamelessGengar
ShamelessGengarLv1

I don't like that it's a harem or necessarily agree with everything going in but it's the first SS fanfic I've seen and it's good enough...just being SS makes it good. I read it all and I'll probably continue reading it regardless of whatever I disagree with because the base novel is just that good The world of SS is just too interesting

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