to be honest the only thing I could knock this fanfic for is some very minor spelling problems with things like heavenly dragon instead of celestial dragon (i am just really nitpicky) also there seem to be some blank spots in this for the ancient weapons knowledge for example their locations and stuff like, but honestly those are just me being nitpicky, so in conclusion this is me assuming you don't read the manga or maybe you do i don't know but you may do due knowing the names of the five elders (i don't remember their names) but all around i reckon this is the best one piece fanfic i have ever read
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