the story is very cliché 3/5
Liked it!
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Fair enough. But I’m working on making it unique. For example adding Leo’s past life lore not many people do that. But I understand your preference.
I like them better when the protagonist transmigrated into bodies that already have an established background in the world that you can make up however you want. It's strange that the protagonist appears out of nowhere, and I didn't like that he lied to Luffy saying he knew Shanks.
Lox_Of_Sins:Fair enough. But I’m working on making it unique. For example adding Leo’s past life lore not many people do that. But I understand your preference.
Okay, good for you I guess that’s your preference. And to address the shanks part he didn’t lie that actually happened. This is lore and I’m not going to out right say it but remember when I said he had red tips in his hair? Who else had red tips. Anyway he just didn’t get the memories because I don’t want to alter his personality.
Yuri_yuri:I like them better when the protagonist transmigrated into bodies that already have an established background in the world that you can make up however you want. It's strange that the protagonist appears out of nowhere, and I didn't like that he lied to Luffy saying he knew Shanks.
(Edit) I meant to say who else had red hair not who else had red tips*
Lox_Of_Sins:Okay, good for you I guess that’s your preference. And to address the shanks part he didn’t lie that actually happened. This is lore and I’m not going to out right say it but remember when I said he had red tips in his hair? Who else had red tips. Anyway he just didn’t get the memories because I don’t want to alter his personality.
