Item: Moving to a different Novel (Rewriting)
Rating: 4.6
Author: Jo_Can

Jo_CanLv131yr

2024-02-28 22:57

Book has potential Im only 15 chapters in so far but I’m enjoying it. Keep up the good work.

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