Review Detail of IkuSaari in His A-list Star: A glamorous comeback

On this platform, it's hard to imagine this selling too well. It's not horrible. The grammar and style are fit for the tropes and the chosen genre. However, that's where it ends for me. Long paragraphs make it impossible to read for mobile users, the self-indulgent language turns me off immediately, and the cardboard-like taste of the plot and the characters prevents me from enjoying this. Someone might enjoy it, because there is a market for this, but I don't consider it to be top quality writing. It's like the book itself is breathing heavily into my ear. Please change the rating, too.