good novel I hope you will continue it and not stop writing this novel. Because i love it and there are rarely novels about Whitebeard in the Naruto world.

This is Chinese, a very unfortunate thing, it doesn't matter, I will try it because I love One Piece and Whitebeard. Anyway, I just hope it's something good, it's a shame that I don't have the writing skills to do my own work.

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looks good, writing seems fine and wish there was more updates! So keep those chapters coming and don't drop!

YES good story, dont drop it. update regularly, kill root. dont make whitebeard go beta and spam conqueror haki with everyone you meet . . . . . . . . .

This is surprisingly good. Like you know what white beard is? A father figure, a family you can rely on. And what alot of Chracther in the Naruto verse lack is a family. So it is both wholesome and action packed.

Love it😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

I would have liked the character of whitebeard more fleshed out but unfortunately it's been very poorly constructed .. Whitebeard once sailed with Rocks and was friend and enemies with Roger and garp and you can't be one if you only have brawn but not the brains.. Only when he was old and had lot injuries that he left the command to Marko to increase the time he can stay so that his crew can strengthen and look after themselves after he has passed away!! Whitebeard is powerful character with enough mind, wit, cunningness in his bones to make even Sengoku prepare multiple measures stacked kn each other to ensure his fall and be almost failed if not for akainu and blackbeards schemes.. anyone good writing but I hope the character were more fleshed and had depth in them..

im having fun reading this novel. Continue this awesome job 😁