Review Detail of CollinX_BrainZ in Marrying The Abyss

Hello, thanks for reading most importantly this would be my very first female lead novel, I plan to put my best in writing it, so just in case you notice any wording or sentence out of place, I would like if it could be pointed out to better help me in writing, also I have no problem with critics in as much it would help me improve. Once again thanks for reading, don't forget to vote with power stone, comment and support this novel.