I’m gonna give you the most honest review that I think is possible I love your work I’ve read every one of them that you’ve wrote so far on this account but they all have a few things that are well let’s say some problems every charachter in your books is almost identical in looks and powers I don’t mean to be rude but it gets a little repetitive this Vikings one is different since he has to eat hearts and not blood but they almost all start the same he gets so powerful too fast and it feels like you skip a lot of his youth, I know youth is boring writing about but. In youth for a story it gives more room for charachter information another thing I would say is you Wright about 20-40 chapters in each book or FanFiction if you will that it seems like your just abandoning it when you write something new in my honest opinion I feel like your work would be more often recommended if you combine all theese stories into one for example start him off in Harry Potter for when he is young and have the worlds he goes to like the Vikings one as like a guide like maybe for him to learn a lesson or something maybe have it give him quests like he works for a ROB to deliver things to different gods in different worlds or have him be like every time he dies he gets sent to a new world but he can take someone or something with him so you can keep writing one book but not keep bouncing around between multiple worlds with a different MC
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