Review Detail of Khayzer in To LOVE-Ru: System, debauchery and troubles

Well I'll be the first to do a review because To Love-RU fanfics are very rare to see here, it has a standard reincarnation beginning, a system to improve and a goddess who observes it, it only has 4 chapters. At the moment there isn't much to say but it looks decent, the MC doesn't have the mentality of a Japanese so that's a plus. The only thing I can really criticize is that the grammar needs some work and I saw a few errors in the names.