its a good fanfic but the problem is that there are plot holes and also the grammar isnt good, the author forgets full stops/periods, puts big gaps in the middle of a monologue which makes the story less fun to read because it just pulls the quality down a lot even though the story is really good
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LIKEFirstHokage:which plot Holes are you talking about?, about the grammar I am working on that đ