Review Detail of oscarozo24 in Dragon Ball Alternative
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Hi, you have a new fan here though I say that with extreme trepidation. I hope you can be the single person able to tackle what I believe to be a major flaw in the DB universe in regard to creating a fanfic. That flaw is the glass ceiling imposed by "The Gods". Kai's, God's of Destruction, Angels and of course Xeno. Imo they do nothing but ruin the universe and make it silly, boring and smaller. No need to explore the great beyond of an ever expanding universe as the "Gods" artificially make it all a useless endeavor. And here comes the fanfic resolution that only serves to exacerbate the issue... Time travel, alternate timelines etc... Yuk. Anyway, Just wanted to pop in and share my appreciation for your skilled work. I have two questions if you have the time to answer: I'm not a fan of long child arcs and was wondering if Ajax will grow up soon? Is Ajax truly immune to aging?
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Im pretty sure he meant that the gods are too powerful for no reason and many db ff authors usually keep that in their stories or even widen the gap
Equuleus_Nox:Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate your kind words! So for Ajax, his child status is really just in the background and won’t really be a hindrance. He will still age like normal but he’ll never leave his prime, which, let’s just say is late twenties to early thirties. The concept and consequences of immortality is still too far a thing for Ajax right now. So Ajax is immune to aging after a certain point, but not now. Also, I’m quite curious with what you mean by glass ceiling for gods. Do you mean that the Gods are too strong, are undefeatable, and thus decrease the cohesion and interesting-ness of the Universe? Cause, I can understand that. Hardly a point in any villains when they can be erased by any GoD or Xeno. Or do you mean they are flawed by their own existence and not their power? Like Gods should never exist?
Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate your kind words! So for Ajax, his child status is really just in the background and won’t really be a hindrance. He will still age like normal but he’ll never leave his prime, which, let’s just say is late twenties to early thirties. The concept and consequences of immortality is still too far a thing for Ajax right now. So Ajax is immune to aging after a certain point, but not now. Also, I’m quite curious with what you mean by glass ceiling for gods. Do you mean that the Gods are too strong, are undefeatable, and thus decrease the cohesion and interesting-ness of the Universe? Cause, I can understand that. Hardly a point in any villains when they can be erased by any GoD or Xeno. Or do you mean they are flawed by their own existence and not their power? Like Gods should never exist?
SENJU:Im pretty sure he meant that the gods are too powerful for no reason and many db ff authors usually keep that in their stories or even widen the gap