Review Detail of 4RT1ST in Shadow of Ice

Currently the story only has a few chapters, so this review may change over time. So far, this fanfic has been the one that has most made me want to stop reading and continue reading at the same time. It's a harem with Yuri, so you can imagine where my idea to stop reading comes from. But at the same time, I find the general idea of the fanfic interesting, even though I don't like all the developments. Also, I don't like how the R18 sections are placed, currently there is one in each chapter, usually near the end, while I prefer separate chapters. Regardless, I think it's appropriate for this story.