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2024-01-06 10:51

ahhh i cant explain it but i felt like i waste my time reading this, there's no character development after 40 chapters they kept talking and explaining. bring me some action man and in early chapter the main character said he would change his attitude like be more aggressive or something but his attitude is still the same.

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Yo, so this is a detailed review of what to expect from the novel. 1. World: it is a post-mana apocalypse word that starts heavy on the magic side with slow revelation of other apocalypse elements. I gave a solid para hinting at the history. Feel free to take a guess in the comment. 2. System: Just like the world there will be at least 2 power systems. Everything starts from mana arts but just a hint that this is not the only system here and the mana arts is quite complex to satisfy you guys. 3. Character: The main characters Drake/Kane are 2 souls that share one body. And no it will not like old man soul things. I try to give both characters distinct traits and you will love it the more they change the control. (read the novel for clarification.) 4. Setting: Well things started with multiple common elements that I combined + my touch that will lead it to something new hopefully. Though You have to read at least 70-80 chapters for that. (Well if anyone read my dungeon one then they knew what I am talking about.) 5. Writing: New to English this is my second work so if you find any problems feel free to point them out, all I can say is I will try to give my best in the chapters. Is there anything left???? Oh yeah, the biggest question ‘is there Harem’? Sorry, I hate harem so nah. Though romance I can’t say much about that as of now. (well I believe all this will be enough for you guys to decide. If there is anything you want to ask feel free to comment in the chapter or here. I will try to answer it as long as it does not spoil things.) [Mc is a human and he can make mistakes. T.Y]

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