Item: Deviant Devil
Rating: 5

KexerAuthor1yr

2023-10-08 00:45

As a man I would like to congratule myself, because I did a good job

Deviant Devil

Kexer

4.7

31 Chs

Liked by 5 people

Replies4

RaphisLv3

Do you want to exchange reviews with me?

1yr

Immortal_GorganLv3

Wanna exchange reviews with me? If so then hit me up.

1yr

KexerAuthor

If the novels good sure, also you dont need to review mine if you want, just want something good to read.

Immortal_Gorgan:Wanna exchange reviews with me? If so then hit me up.

1yr

Immortal_GorganLv3

Sure, but I planned on giving your novel a try anyways. PS If you liked anyone of them be sure to check out the others. The newer ones have a better, more descriptive writing style. PS I don't suggest trying [War World] and [Tales Undead Tell] if you don't like sad stories (although I personally believe that they are good).

Kexer:If the novels good sure, also you dont need to review mine if you want, just want something good to read.

1yr

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pe_laseLv2

Its good though it has its cons: First the concept has a lot of potential, its like a twist in the evoulitoan or race changing genre. Though till around chapter 20 it does get a bit confusing at times, but the fighthing scenes are extremely good especially the one in the latest chapter. Also I like The mcs personality, despite being young hes already established values and there seems to be a big backstory around him, also like how snarky and chaotic he is. He doesnt hesitate to use underhanded methods, or kill unless it benefits him to keep a person alive. Also its pretty similiar to Supreme magus in theme, but this time instead of medieval its dsytopian cyberpunk that has a lot of potential thanks to there being a lot more planets and oppurtinity. 4.9/5

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gbaqueroLv12

It's a pretty good novel. The only thing the author needs to work on is the story's pacing. Sometimes it feels too fast and you may get lost. Other than that, I do believe that the story has the potential to become something big if that sole problem gets solved. Has good grammar, a great idea behind the world-building, and the MC is likable! Don't give up, author! We learn from our mistakes after all. Have a nice writing and may your novel prosper! ;)

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GalacticSlimeLv1

This is pretty good! The initial cyberpunk vybe and mystery regarding both the protagonist and the world overall was very captivating. Crim seems like a cool character with tons of room to gro, so I'm looking forward to it.

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Eldritch_Umbra_2710Lv1

Easily one of the best stories I've read on WN. Aside from some minor grammar mistakes, I'd say the writing quality is top notch. The plot is quite interesting, and Crim makes for a fun protagonist. I'd really recommend this one.

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monawritaLv3

The chapters are a tad bit short, but that's still fixable at this moment. I found myself laughing while reading the first few chapters. I loved it.

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HotAsianBoyLv4

The novel has quite a wide array of interesting things like a magic system, mystical beings and demons. There is also two separate worlds that I think kinda resembles an isekai. Good pacing and weird momentos I like!

1yr

KexerAuthor

The book will be on hold for a little bit, Unless I decide to change back to deviant before I finish with endless magic, but chapters will be posted sometimes.

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HolomezLv13

Reveal spoiler

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Ninestar619_5803Lv4

This is a great book. Awesome plot and great world-building. The character design is excellent as it makes you attracted to read more about what is going to happen next. The writing style is great, giving a smooth road for us to read on. Great work author!

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