Here are 5 stars for your book. For absolute beginners, I must say this is quite good. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

8 chapters in, I genuinely enjoyed the story. There are no mistakes in writing, so there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s really good and I took a liking in Richard, he is a well written character. Recomend 10/10!

With Samuel's arrival, the story has become livelier. Even though he is old, he manages to capture my interest. Richard also has a personality that I like, calm and not impulsive. I appreciate the quality of your writing. 🌟🌟

it was really well written, i was absolutely immersed!! i hope you keep up the excellent pace because curiosity has me on my toes right now!

good for the start I love it post more of

Incredible writing clarity and precision! Choice of words were accurate, descriptions were detailed but not over the top, and the concept is interesting. I've honestly said "wow" several times and I kept checking if it's already chapter 6 because I want to read more. There were few grammatical errors and extra words in the first chapters, and paragraphs were pretty long but I've seen improvements in the latter parts. Keep up the good work and please continue writing. [img=update]

although the synopsis is short it surely is captivating and the author did a great job in the chapters released but I know there's still room for improvementplease work on your synopsis and check for some grammatical errorsexcept that your book is perfect^_^can't wait to read more

Already, your synopsis is intriguing. The way go in-depth through your description is pretty impressive. your quality is def. 5/5. though there are some parts where sentences get a bit cramped and hard to read. Still, its worth the read

Enjoyed every page of this novel! The world-building was impressive, and the characters felt real. A great read for any fantasy fan! Looking forward to more from this author! [img=recommend]