Review Detail of HambinoRanx in From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
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310 Chapters: I think it is time to review my thoughts after spending so much time writing and some expectations of the future. I would like to start first off with people who like to buy chapters in bulk and suggest against doing that; I have written a few filler chapters that are listed as (Filler Chapters). 157 166 171 202 203 These were written so I could give a bit of extra to the story while taking a break from the fast-paced plot progression, If you want to read these, you can, but they in no way affect the current story; they range of a flashback before Ty became a skeleton, Todd and Nanakos life before Ty arrived and a break of bonding as Ty learns more who King Griswald is. The main reason for this is I have read WNs where the plot will just stop for 4-5 chapters straight as the MC is doing the most mundane thing and I feel my coins were wasted. So doing this I hope to save you some coins :) As far as the story goes, I am happy with its progress after 310 chapters and feel that the pacing is fast. I am not the best English writer, so if you find any mistakes, please let me know. I run each chapter through Grammarly and ChatGPT4 just to check for spelling errors, Punctuation mistakes, and general grammar errors that can arise, as I can't afford a standard editor. Finally, the plot is fast-moving, with a lot of action between Ty and everyone involved. There are countless mysteries added to the story, some answered quickly and some taking longer to be revealed. I promise I will not forget any of the characters. For people who get to the locked chapters and directly after, more will come of that scene and that place around the 500 chapters, so look forward to that if you stick around for the long run. And speaking of the long run, after 300 chapters, you might be asking how far along the story is and how much longer it has to go. When I started, my goal was always 1,000 chapters because I had planned out a specific end goal for many characters, and I am still on track to meet that goal. Lastly, every chapter is anywhere from 1,100 to 1,600 words. I upload 14 to 16 chapters per week, and anytime there is a holiday like Christmas or New Year's, I will release a filler chapter to take some time off and enjoy family time. I will aim to make filler chapters fun, but I like to be transparent with my readers on what they can skip so they can save coins, and I can keep writing to appease the WN gods. But if you have any questions or concerns, please let me know below, and I will answer anything and everything I can. I also gave myself a 3 on writing as I am still learning as I go and can always get better.
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
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I’ve read to chapter 305 now and it definitely feels like a harem direction, just the MC is slow to return the feelings as he’s really only concerned with the female lead. I think that will change though eventually.
jacx_1491:so this isn't a harem then??
Around chapter 550, He will have 3 visits to earth throughout the story but his first visit back will be at chapter 550 roughly. Let me know if you have any other questions
Miles_Williams_4733:Can you say which chapter ty gets back to earth ?
I will also say they stay in communication when possible, and he is able to keep an eye on her as he plans to get back. He never seeks out other relationships either.
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Not the typical harem where he seduced every women he comes across. Most of the women will in fact have romantic feelings for him, but the first half of the novel is entirely about the MC being devoted to his girlfriend still on Earth. The feelings with the other female leads will develop after he makes that reconnection with Jade and Jade actually meets some of them. I won’t spoil names but as you read you will have a clear idea of who will be in his endgame. This is going to be a long novel and I am focusing on the plot and the evolving female leads who assist Ty with getting back to Earth. This just isn’t the traditional Harem where females instantly fall for the MC and he just blindly falls for them back. Things take time and the pool will be small. If you have any other questions about size or who I like writing about the most let me know. I should be around chapter 800-900 by September - October hoping to hit chapter 1,000 by January.
jacx_1491:so this isn't a harem then??
Supreme_IQ:How did you change the name of your novel after it has already been ccontracted?
HambinoRanx:Not the typical harem where he seduced every women he comes across. Most of the women will in fact have romantic feelings for him, but the first half of the novel is entirely about the MC being devoted to his girlfriend still on Earth. The feelings with the other female leads will develop after he makes that reconnection with Jade and Jade actually meets some of them. I won’t spoil names but as you read you will have a clear idea of who will be in his endgame. This is going to be a long novel and I am focusing on the plot and the evolving female leads who assist Ty with getting back to Earth. This just isn’t the traditional Harem where females instantly fall for the MC and he just blindly falls for them back. Things take time and the pool will be small. If you have any other questions about size or who I like writing about the most let me know. I should be around chapter 800-900 by September - October hoping to hit chapter 1,000 by January.
Good question. I enjoy writing where complex emotions come into play. I’m sure you can understand feelings that you have to fight or push down. In that regard I’m aiming to write natural emotions and how they develop over time. Specially in high stressful moments and that includes people falling and showing feelings for the MC. Whether it’s returned or not dives into a the evolving emotions of the characters as they are written. But the Harem tag is because he has a deep connection with the female support cast that come up and into the story, even if it’s not all sexual relationships I feel it still fits the realm of being close enough to the harem tag. I’m only concerned on writing the best story I can though and I feel the tags present fits the current story and the direction it’s going. Still so much to write for this one and feel free to ask any other questions that you may have. I have a bad habit of rambling so please forgive me.
jacx_1491:then why make harem dude? if he is so devoted i don't see a problem why I can't be just 1 fl
understand man, there is no almost harem it's if it is harem or no harem, if for eg there is harem tag now and people who like it read your story and pay for it,but then with the way you develop those characters and their emotions,it end up not being harem , then what? won't people who paid for it be furious and feel betrayed ?if the girl they wanted and liked despite having very close relationship with the mc does not end up in haem then?what will you do then?so pls don't play with "almost" harem. be clear from the start if ur is going to harem or not!
HambinoRanx:Good question. I enjoy writing where complex emotions come into play. I’m sure you can understand feelings that you have to fight or push down. In that regard I’m aiming to write natural emotions and how they develop over time. Specially in high stressful moments and that includes people falling and showing feelings for the MC. Whether it’s returned or not dives into a the evolving emotions of the characters as they are written. But the Harem tag is because he has a deep connection with the female support cast that come up and into the story, even if it’s not all sexual relationships I feel it still fits the realm of being close enough to the harem tag. I’m only concerned on writing the best story I can though and I feel the tags present fits the current story and the direction it’s going. Still so much to write for this one and feel free to ask any other questions that you may have. I have a bad habit of rambling so please forgive me.
Good Morning, Jac, You raise a good point and it's important for readers to understand that this isn't a novel where every female lead or support gets married to the MC or is his. It will be closer to Mushokai Tensei in the sense of having 3 wives that he is closely aligned with throughout the entire story, but part of the fun is figuring out who those people will be as most of it comes after he meets with Jade again. while I have a majority of the story planned to write over 1,000 chapters, I still am working on the emotions of some characters and how they will fit in the larger story. Thank you though for your feedback, it's truly great to have and will help me further aim the story correctly.
jacx_1491:understand man, there is no almost harem it's if it is harem or no harem, if for eg there is harem tag now and people who like it read your story and pay for it,but then with the way you develop those characters and their emotions,it end up not being harem , then what? won't people who paid for it be furious and feel betrayed ?if the girl they wanted and liked despite having very close relationship with the mc does not end up in haem then?what will you do then?so pls don't play with "almost" harem. be clear from the start if ur is going to harem or not!
so even those that you have marked as female leads may not be in harem?that's rough.......if you are gonna do that do so very carefully because most people are not gonna take it very well....anyway that's just my opinion and I have found this story not fit for mmr yt hl with your work!
HambinoRanx:Good Morning, Jac, You raise a good point and it's important for readers to understand that this isn't a novel where every female lead or support gets married to the MC or is his. It will be closer to Mushokai Tensei in the sense of having 3 wives that he is closely aligned with throughout the entire story, but part of the fun is figuring out who those people will be as most of it comes after he meets with Jade again. while I have a majority of the story planned to write over 1,000 chapters, I still am working on the emotions of some characters and how they will fit in the larger story. Thank you though for your feedback, it's truly great to have and will help me further aim the story correctly.
jacx_1491:so even those that you have marked as female leads may not be in harem?that's rough.......if you are gonna do that do so very carefully because most people are not gonna take it very well....anyway that's just my opinion and I have found this story not fit for mmr yt hl with your work!
Ohhh, thank you, I was a bit confused and the both listed FLs are Jade his actual GF who will of course remain and Kieran currently. Eventually some listed as support will move up as FLs also once they have developed more in the story. I do appreciate your feedback and while it saddens me my story isn’t for you, I hope you find the book you’re looking for in the end, so happy reading :)
jacx_1491:i meant good luck with your work!
HambinoRanx:Also I love Tournament and Death Match arcs so look forward to a few of those over the next 1,000 chapters if that fancies you.