My favourite Lookism fanfic everything is perfect and author add my fav genre(OVERPOWERED MC)

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There story didn't really flow. When I first read this, I was confused and found it hard to follow along with the plot.

Writing Quality- It’s great and there’s nearly no grammatical mistakes, so far I only found 2. Update Stability- Well the story just started so hopefully it has good stability. Story Development- The story is developing greatly. He is giving out info. But not in as big info. Dumps and the chapters are quite long. Character Desgin- I would say that he has created the main character in a great way. World Background- Well it’s a fanfic…

please release more chapters eveyones are waiting for next chapter

i really like it its masterpiece i like that mc is overpowered like hes LEGEND however mc sister would be good if she would fall in love with daniel park in his second body and you are gonna train him bc you saw his potential however mc already know his potential of course however make him stronger

Good.

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why don't you continue season 3 again .. 😭

I want more.....................................