I'm gonna give good marks for this, and will give a second review once more chapter's comes out. Sorry this will be a wall, on my phone so I apologize for not being able to space it out. anyway I love the prologue, and I hope when they find out they can't log out you won't do SAO style. It would be nice to see how things goes early on, seeing how smooth the prologue is. Story wise very nice. slight shame she went half human, wish she didnt', but that's personal opinion and not a critic. Overall great flow, lifelike main character, she is not stiff, nor one dimemnsional so far, hard to say early. I do hope you won't burn yourself out for seemingly pushing a few chapters a day. No need to rush yourself, unless you lessen the load once the prologue is done, not that I would know what is going on in your head. The background is good so far, it is clear she can draw from her former game, giving her an advantage, one advantage many have. Overall can't wait to see how it all unfolds
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