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LadyforSea
LadyforSeaLv11yr
2023-10-07 09:17

I didn't like it very much, the author greatly exaggerates the relevance that a Brazilian president would have in a world like this, besides the MC being 19 years old, it almost killed me with a cringe, if the author changed his age to around 35 years old and then reduced it a little his ego would be cool, 4 stars to help his compatriot

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Escritorcomtempo
EscritorcomtempoAuthor

Dude, I'm not increasing Brazil's relevance, research how much Brazil exports, research the Atlantic Forest, the Amazon, the amount of drinking water we have, imagine all of this being burned? and thrown away, are we relevant? Other than that, it was specified that the MC was only elected because of a very embarrassing situation, which is that you are not Brazilian and you would not understand the voting process, but in terms of the relevance of Brazil, I suggest researching a little more. A radical Brazil is much worse than several atomic bombs

LadyforSea
LadyforSeaLv1

You didn't understand my comment, Brazil wouldn't be relevant in a world of heroes and villains, the United States alone has dozens of walking atomic bombs called heroes, if your character always acted like this he would simply die, the first to kill him would be the black widow who is an agent of the American government

Escritorcomtempo:Dude, I'm not increasing Brazil's relevance, research how much Brazil exports, research the Atlantic Forest, the Amazon, the amount of drinking water we have, imagine all of this being burned? and thrown away, are we relevant? Other than that, it was specified that the MC was only elected because of a very embarrassing situation, which is that you are not Brazilian and you would not understand the voting process, but in terms of the relevance of Brazil, I suggest researching a little more. A radical Brazil is much worse than several atomic bombs
LadyforSea
LadyforSeaLv1

Also according to the Brazilian constitution, to compete for the position of president you must be at least 40 years old, 19 years old you exaggerated too much

Escritorcomtempo:Dude, I'm not increasing Brazil's relevance, research how much Brazil exports, research the Atlantic Forest, the Amazon, the amount of drinking water we have, imagine all of this being burned? and thrown away, are we relevant? Other than that, it was specified that the MC was only elected because of a very embarrassing situation, which is that you are not Brazilian and you would not understand the voting process, but in terms of the relevance of Brazil, I suggest researching a little more. A radical Brazil is much worse than several atomic bombs
TheMotherLand
TheMotherLandLv4

Never thought the day would come where I would be seeing Brazilian propaganda in WN of all things.

Cauan_Robert
Cauan_RobertLv1

The funny thing is that almost no story about Marvel, heroes or the United States makes sense, so why does everything about Brazil have to be taken at risk? In reality, it's a bit comical how much the world cries about Brazil, as almost everyone says they love the country but always with prejudice. If each person were to study Brazil seriously, they would see how scary it is and our army, just out of curiosity, the American soldier starts to be considered elite after he comes to train in Brazil, class agent. Furthermore, we are talking about the Marvel universe with several others where we know that gods and myths are true, and knowing this because Brazil could not have any connection, I don't know, there are several possibilities like sorcerers or even several connections with gods because Brazil was a country that in the beginning accepted various mythologies with the arrival of various peoples. Furthermore, we also know that all Marvel countries have their own organization with special powers and Brazil, being in the top 10, wouldn't it?

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