Short Review: I loved this fanfic. Not gonna lie, for the first time in last few months have I read such a good fanfic that made me give a review. Overall I love the pacing, though I sometimes have problem, remembering the names of the characters lol; would be great to have some images. Anyway definitely worth reading. Waiting for the next chapters lol. My detailed review: Writing Quality: (4 stars) Feel a bit fast paced. Would have been really great if author would have taken a short while in going deeper into the plot, and explaining what had happened in more details. Updating Stability: (5 stars I guess?) I guess 5 chaps/week is great updating schedule. Story Development: (4 stars) Like I said before would have loved it more if there was a bit more details. On another note, most of the feats of MC is off screen which makes it just Hax with no real feats. Would be great to go a bit more into details. Character Design: (4 stars) Love the character design of MC love the ruthlessness and character. The only thing is that I don’t like how MC once whispered insulting words to his father (The lord of faction) and I think his father would have actually taken it as an offense of it was according to original canon. He was good only to a few of his sons, but from what I saw, MC have rarely interacted with his father so it would have been a bit too different from what happened in this FF. Anyway it was still enjoyable so guess 4.5 stars but since I can’t give half star, so have given 4 stars. If MC is trying to hide his abilities make it so that it is logical and not like that plot. As this would have angered MCs father and would have revealed his abilities if his father would have actually taken action. World Background: (5 star) It’s Nano Machines, son! Overall: 4.4 stars. Worth reading. (PIN?) lol
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so it's a young master hiding abilities thats not my cup of tea.
Kind of but still don’t like how he act “low”key which actually being not “low” Key at all.
