I tried I really did, but this was too much for me, I read up to chapter 23 before having to call it quits. The Writing quality is legible and flows well enough, so no complaints in that department and it's updated regularly from what I saw, but the story development was pointless. It was the exact same as cannon plus an inserted character. For character design the MC is cringe inducing at times and funny at other, but he's just a gag at this point because with a Meliodas's Demon Physique and a 1.5 year head start he's only one stage above Arthur. Finally the world background is average noting new from what I read nothing really new, besides Elizabeth being inserted as Tess' Twin sister... yeah idk what I was expecting, but it wasn't this. It's not for everyone, but give it a try and you might like it. Also the forced relationship development between Tess and Arthur? She was interested in him because he saved her in this pic Meliodas saved her so...?
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