The climax and the Suspense is engaging I loved to see that....I would need further chapters .. I started to love your Story. Transitioning to Earth and the city of Sylvaria, you excel in creating a vivid and relatable backdrop. The introduction of characters like Emi, Hiroshi, and their involvement in the sports event adds a charming and engaging layer to the story. I totally Lost in your Story the plot is amazing the new found powers adds a super suspsnese layer and god has given him the power this is soo much fun..Love to see more plz waiting..
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