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Giga_Weeb
Giga_WeebLv21yr
2023-10-17 19:54

the writing grammatically and stylishly good but the plot is literally half missing. the story starts in a climax and we know nothing about the mc or his powers except that he is comically overpowered and flexing on everyone. the vast majority of what is currently written is POV's from side characters too. It seems like an exciting climax too, but it's hard to enjoy because the MC is too strong and we don't even know him. Even if the after the invasion the mc's plot kicks in it's still gonna be super boring after the invasion, which so far has just been reactions. 3 stars because it could be a pretty good story if it wasn't missing the first 100 chapters.

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The_Noobulas
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this seems to be a continuation of another authors work I was reading called Technomacer of Marvel they even have the same ai and power set but even then this seems to just start in the middle of the chitari invasion so even if we see this as a continuation of that one (which is on hiatus currently) it still skips approximately 4 to 5 years of content, but ye it seems to be a continuation of the other since they have ALOT in common including the ai, the rescue droids, and even the rivalry with Jarvis and seemingly Tony

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