Review Detail of Around_The_Moon in Cancelled...

Hmm this is a good start. A god was chased by someone and was forced to reincarnate. But there is still I don't get a lot. The author is new so he doesn't know how to show not tell but still it was a good plot. And also rather than saying the scene shifted to the scientist you would have directly told in a laboratory or in a research room. I hope the author can fix it. Everything else good. I also want to know what is the world trigger Event the system said. But I think that's too early.