Even after a couple of chapters, I could see an interesting world building behind it! Please do check your format, as there are some paragraphs that are cu tin half and quite a lot of spacing is off; making it hard to read. Also, adding a summary will help the readers know a little about the reading before stepping into the chapters (and it's a great start to hook them on your story!).
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