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Joao_Pires
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New review, made when the story reached 33 chapters. The author said that the book was translated, but still the writing is sometimes very weird. Lately, the author is not using the correct tenses and, the way the characters talk is very weird. Here's an example: Hermione and Leo are talking alone and Leo says: "Hermione doesn't need to move the wand that fast, Hermione should move more gently."

Hermione and The Genius Magic Formula (Harry Potter Fanfic)

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kuraina
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LoL that sounds like a house elf😂

Joao_Pires
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Maybe you could use google docs to write, as it already has a good spell cheking optiom, or ChatGPT (ask him to just correct the grammar, or else he sometimes changes the meaning of the sentences).

Abayomi_Atoyegbe
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chat got is such a hack if you know how to use it.

Joao_Pires:Maybe you could use google docs to write, as it already has a good spell cheking optiom, or ChatGPT (ask him to just correct the grammar, or else he sometimes changes the meaning of the sentences).
Abayomi_Atoyegbe
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*Chat gpt

Abayomi_Atoyegbe:chat got is such a hack if you know how to use it.